(Fwd) tBS in Elmira

[Dave Berry]

An excellent review, but one sentence caught my eye:

On 26 Nov 12:13, Ted Jackson jr. wrote:
> Lead vocals came mainly
> from pint-sized powerhouse Deb Frost, Al's wife, and a former rock
> critic.

How many vocalists were there?  It reads like there were two -- Deb, and
an anonymous rock critic.  You could even stretch it to three!  It
tickled my funny bone, anyway.

I'd change "and" to "who is", but your taste may vary.

Dave.
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