HW: hawks/fantasy

[Samantha Kirwan]

yeah - shouldn't use conjunctives with commas!!! (Is it conjunctives??)

Sorry this is totally off topic but another of my strange little
fascinations!

Sam




-----Original Message-----
From: John Majka [mailto:jmajka2 at HOME.COM]
Sent: 25 May 2001 00:26
To: BOC-L at LISTSERV.SPC.EDU
Subject: Re: HW: hawks/fantasy


> Was it the superstar syndrome, which Mr Baker may have had a touch of,
which
> the band seems to have no tolerance for, that caused his leaving?
> and can someone please let me know if my grammar is correct? commas etc!

"Was it the superstar syndrome, of which mr. Baker may have had a touch, and
for which the band seems to have no tolerance, that caused his leaving?"
The above is the correct way of writing that sentence.
John Majka, licensed English teacher and pharmacist!
jmajka2 at home.com


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